Student example

We liked....

• the music- it suited the genre
• The voice over was a good idea; it suited the mood. Only problem was that you couldnt make it out very well
• The beginning car shot was too long, and abit wobbly, but was a good idea for an opening
• The shot with the parts of the gun was good, because it showed what the film might envolve, a gun, but left lots of question - this is what a thriller opening should do
• The title of the piece was very effective and was a good effect.
  
• The actual titles looked good on the black screen in between each shot. We have decided to do this for ours, but with a slight difference.
• We are not sure if it was in chronological order, or it was just us getting confused with the shots of the man driving, and then being back in the room, and leaving to get into the van. Maybe it was supposed to be out of order?